Miss Ching

Hey Saily! I really like your poem! It's so creative and thoughtful. The part where the girl compared herself to "her" really blew me away. Just a few things though. ...

Hi Cotton! You've got a really interesting story here. The imagery in the story really helps the reader understand every part of your story better. I love your adjectives! Great ...

Hey! I thought your story was really creative what with the "Lin Snow" and "Charles Prince" haha. But the setting of the story is somewhat confusing. I think, though, that ...

Hi! I just gotta say that this really is great. The descriptiveness of everything helps with the entirely captivating storyline. It was really enjoyable to read and your thorough knowledge ...

I really like the perspective from which this poem is written in. It's a real eye opener to what our parents might feel as we grow out of their reach. ...

Hi Hailey_Ann! Firstly I really need to say that I thought this poem had a lot of real, believable emotion behind it and that's always a good thing. It was ...